Final+(?)+Paper

Here is the final final paper in case anyone wants a copy. It has been great working with everyone! Thanks,



Hello, I have added a paragraph at the beginning with our goals and objectives that covers the issues of what cultures we will cover and how we would strive to be sensitive in our teaching of other cultures.

Also, I redid the area about sustaining interest by elaborating on helping teachers meet their goals, and adding a separate paragraph about meeting student’s developmental needs.

In both sections I added more of Joanna’s ideas that I initially had cut out, and moved her piece about researching cultures to the third paragraph (so thanks Joanna!).

I have highlighted the parts that I changed in yellow. If you make any changes to the paper, please make sure you make them obvious by highlighting them or putting them in a different font color.

Let me know what you think. Thanks, Darsi



Above is the new file with Rachel's changes.

I think the changes you made are awesome, Darsi, and I LOVE having the developmental section at the end. I think you tied it all together beautifully.

I went through and made some minor changes, mainly wording issues, and everywhere it said "the multicultural reading program", I replaced it with "Reading Around the World" since that's technically the name of the program. I also put a few comments in the margins for things I felt might be unclear. All of my changes are highlighted in red.

We're almost there, ladies!

Rachel : )